I believe this is it!

Here we go, I think this is the money shot(hopefully). My Pixar friend, Annee, gave me lots ot pointers to make this piece a lot better. I thinned down her left forearm because, and I qutoe from Annee, "her arm looks too meaty." The shoulder was still giving problems and she concluded that the perpendicular angle made her look very stiff. So, raised the shoulder up a bit and this helped a lot. And her left hand is very masculine.....and I tried my best this time but it's sooooo hard to correct it. What do you think?



And for comparison:


*UPDATE*

I redid the nose and change color scheme for the lips. I'll probably need to add more black on the bottom to balance out.